File talk:Italian-social-republic-and-civil-war.svg

This is the comment to the new version I've uploaded.

Fixed some informations lost.

Fixed the fonts.

Fixed some orthography errors.

Added the territories held by Yugoslav partisans in Dalmazia and in the Province of Ljubljana (see http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/f/f8/Oslobo%C4%91ena_teritorija_septembra_1944.jpg ).

About the British-Yugoslav occupation of Lissa (Vis), see: "Chronology and Index of the Second World War, 1938-1945" (The Royal Institute of International Affairs) and "Tito, Mihailović, and the Allies, 1941-1945" (Walter R. Roberts).

About the names of Sebenico and Spalato, during WW2 Italian name was still in use in anglophone maps (see, for example, http://images.nationmaster.com/images/motw/historical/italy_1921.jpg ), but I've choosen to keep both names.

--Emanuele Mastrangelo (留言) 23:46, 5 March 2015 (UTC)

Re the occupied Yugoslav islands of Vis, Korčula, and Mljet. The problem here is that the difference between the grey and light green areas isn't defined. Does grey denote areas claimed, but never controlled by the RSI? If so, I'm reasonably certain these islands were liberated immediately after the Italian capitulation - and should therefore be in grey. As far as I can gather they were all in Yugoslav control by October 1943. Do your sources give a date?

Either way - its unacceptable to refer to their liberation by the Allies as "occupation". Further points:

• Its further unacceptable to refer to Yugoslav cities by their Italian names: this isn't the 1940s. If anything - its Fiume and Zara that need to have '(Rijeka)' and '(Zadar)' below so that the English-speaking reader can tell what cities they are.
• The grammar is off. I fixed it, you reverted that ("sovereignty's removal"??). Formulations are weird.. "by Germans and Croats" instead of "Germany and Croatia", etc.. Please restore the formulation I introduced in the font you prefer. Or, please tell which font that is so I can do it (again).
• There's no need for an image frame on Wikipedia, as thumbnails and infoboxes add it anyway.
• Finally, please be advised that the German and Croatian flags in the version you uploaded are inaccurate. The disc in the German flag should be shifted towards the left, and its proportions are incorrect, whereas the Croatian flag is just off (colours inaccurate, symbols weird).

What font are you using? --DIREKTOR ^(TALK) 13:06, 15 March 2015 (UTC)