File talk:1st Boston Marathon blast seen from 2nd floor and a half block away.jpg

Category change while protected

{{Edit request}}

Replace old:

[[Category:Uploaded with UploadWizard]]
 
[[Category:Boston Marathon explosions]]

With new:

[[Category:Uploaded with UploadWizard]]
[[Category:2013 Boston Marathon site after bombings]]
[[Category:Injuries]]
[[Category:Sidewalks in the United States]]

--Closeapple (talk) 16:51, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

•  Done, thanks for helping! odder (talk) 20:38, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

Photo Description needs revising

Description reads: "Taken exactly 10 seconds after other pic I uploaded. Still no police, people helping wounded. One of a series of pix the FBI should see. Contrast, etc adj by me (d bowman)".

This contains a reference to an uncited "other picture", unnecessary adjectives (exactly), shorthand (pic), unverified claims (no police), politically charged language (FBI should see), misspellings (pix, adj), redundancy (Credits uploader who is clearly credited in the history) and non-capitalized proper nouns (d bowman).

Consider revising to: "Photo of Boston Marathon Bombing blast site minutes after explosion. Visible are bystanders, wounded, and those tending to the wounded. This picture was taken before emergency crews had arrived."